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Gilli
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(10/14/04 1:14 am)
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just a new story i'm working on...
The stench of sweaty bodies rubbing against each other was no longer bearable. A person can only enjoy this when they’re high. ‘No wonder I use to do so many drugs’ I thought to myself as I shifted through the crowd. With each step I took I felt the pounding music against my feet. It felt kinda nice. I smiled and made my way through the rest of the crowd.
        The fresh air hit my face like a brick. I nearly fell over. My senses were so high I could hardly stand it. After I was through with my orgasmic encounter with the air, I began to walk to my apartment. I lived near by.
        The soft thud of my rubber boot soles hitting the pavement was soothing. My ears still slightly rang from all the noise at the club. I began to hum a song to pass time. A soft breeze hit my face and I lost my balance.
        “@#%$.” I cursed under my breath as I slowly stood. My hands were slightly raw and bloody. What a way to end such a wonderful night.
        Sighing I walked into my dark apartment, closed the door and locked it tight. I’m paranoid, so what. I took off my shoes and moaned as my feet made contact with the carpet.
        “If carpet does that to you I wonder what I could do.” I heard someone say. I nearly jumped out of my skin. I reached around for the light switch as I felt two hands tightly grasp onto my wrists. I felt and smelled the man’s breath on my face. I couldn’t help but shut my eyes tightly. The breath was gone. A sharp sting ran through my arms. ‘Oh my @#%$ he’s licking my hand!’ I nearly screamed in my mind.

i gotta write some more but tell me what you think so far

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Kari
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Posts: 37
(10/14/04 4:49 pm)
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Re: just a new story i'm working on...
GO ON.


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